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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story! i hope you add more!
;3
-NekoMara
;3
-NekoMara
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grammar, learn it, and use it. No quotation marks at all? With no quotes, no one is talking, just words on a screen. Misue of commas at numerous points, no use when actually needed make this at a level of under 6th grade comprehension level. In other words, people would be better off reading a newspaper.
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You now whats funny and crazy my name is Marcus and im big and black!? cept i havent raped ne one lol wut are u watching me or something hahaha great story by the way
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't mind. go ahead and add a chapter if you wish.
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
intertesting enough of a story, but i was wondering if you would mind if i added a chapter to it?^_^
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull. Simply wonderful. Keep it up.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was hot and it got me hot too. good work