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learn some damn grammar already. i can't understand anything you wrote.

your title explains it all that sucks that she died it would have been good if you left it as a cliffhanger but that's me. now on to things. update soon

oh my god u must write more it was the best story i have ever read

beastboy gets raven and starfire now thats preaty good. hope to see more chapters from this story keep writing. your doing great.

Pretty Good story you got there!

i think despite the grammer issue this is a really good story i find the whole Star/bb/rae paring to be interesting as withe the Cy/bumble bee/jinx paring. i really think that robin wouldn't do that to star but the two did get along during the episode sisters. what i don't get is the whole tattoo issue is that a mark to show people that he is Raven's. and i think that Raven was a little nice to BB when he cheated on her,(come on he pissed off the daughter of a interdimentional demon). that all keep it up.

Chapter seven wasd interesting in a dark unique bizzare way on the BB/Rae/Star front.

Whee Jinx having a baby!

Ohhhhhhhhhhh Poor wobins diddums hurt his back!

Good story, I enjoy it and look forward to the next chapter. Jinx's baby twin girls. Raven finds out about Starfire abd BB but Starfire and Raven talk and they decide to share their love for Beast Boy.

*After reading chapter 4*
Snap! This is going to become complicated real fast.
Raven will be somewhat iffy about this situation and angry to boot.
Unless Starfire explains her reasoning abnout this situation as well as beasytboy thesre will be a spectre of doubt assailing the situation in general. Doubt is most possinbly ther biggest deathkneel to love in existance.

As for the baby situation for Jinx I am nutral to tjhat aspect a baby is a baby it is a gift of love and anyone thaty prefers a gender would by some small default be cheapening that gift a bit.

Sorry I have weird veiws

Enjoying the fanfic so far
The happy maniac from W.A.
BrianDarksoul~

make this a star/bb/rae fanfic