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for Betrayal

by Malcore

schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
prity good
person Anon
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woah. very nice work as always. you should make a sequel to this.
person Whitney
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what you should do? You should right a story where Robin and Raven get married and have a baby girl, who happens to be Starfire. It'd be cool. If you still wanted her a Tamaraian, just have Raven be used for experiments while she was pregnant or something... I dunno, but with you writing it, it'd be cool to read!!
person CT
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good fic so far, but your spelling is a little off, and you put words in that honestly do not make sense with the phrasing... I don't know, I like the storyline and plot.

~*CT*~
person Nunzio
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute, fun stuff here.

Please continue soon.
person possessedghost
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great update
person Kay
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude work on your freaking gammar!! I didn't understand a thing!