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for A Certain Shade of Gray

by JBChan

person CrazyIvan(notloggedin)
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um, another definition for phalanx is a multicannon usualy mounted on ships with 6-8 barrels of 30-40mm. They're generaly used for antimissile, and anti air. Just thought you might wanna know.
Oh, and the soldier formation phalanx, is actualy where they form a square, and hold their shields out at all sides and had pikes deployed in front, this was typicaly used if there were archers, it was also effective against cavealry.
And the finger joint stuff, that's not phalanx, it's phalanges.
Well, time for me to get going, sepher phi, carry on...
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, you're good.
person Jessi
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!! X was left behind!!
person DevilHunter
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Story. Only problem I see with it is it would take X(Robin) about 3.5 seconds to get out of those shackles. Why do I say this, you ask? Because if there are two things X happens to be it's this: a master escape artist and a genius at contingency plans. There is almost nothing he can't think his way out of, and the predicament you put him in, he could easily get out of. If you wish to reply, email me.
person Jason
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story please update soon!!!!!!!
person Psychedelic Leviathan
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is good...very good. Jinx is hot and not used enough in these fics.
person sinkore
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if x is robin than i have one thing to say....no non no no no no beastboy and raven skrew robin you can put robin with silky the worm for all i care but never put him with raven. well its your story so good luck
person troutman30
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To change Larry the Cable Guys line just a little; "Now That's Sexy". If you don't think thats sexy, theres something wrong with You!
I love the twist at the end.
person Shadow
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic!...*applauds* nice ideas!... and nice twist for the ending!... nyes...the pairings were very original!... i loved it!...
person Arin Ross
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(throws back head and laughs) Oh he so had that coming! I really loved your ending- I usually don't like F/F/M, but this was a very good one. I do have one critique to make- at one point you refer to X's doowacky as a phalanx- ...phalanx means finger or toe bone, or a group of soldiers that attack in tight formation...yes I looked that up...yes I'm weird that way. Only complaint. (laughs again) Damn that was a good ending!