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for Intertwining Hearts

by Comrade

schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Would have been nice seeing Robin make this a love square, if not a tetrahedron.
person Lolths Champion
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better every time I read it.
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Robin Holmes
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was just rereading a few of my favorites, and I rediscovered this one. JESUS CHRIST ON A STICK is that good. Hell, You could rewrite it as a non erotic love story between the three of them, and it would STILL rock. I always did see the three of them together. I LOVED it. Masterfully written
person TC
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I love the writing style you employ. The plot itself was kickass too, and the detail was good. Saw a few spelling mistakes, but a good beta reader would help that. Overall, this is one of the best fics I've read in a long time.
person mr d
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe burn robin BURN!!! yeah i read this fic AGAIN its still good. honest! Ew did i just say that??!! Mein gott!
Oh yeah just so you all know sleep is for losers! fun fact: i get an average of 2 hours of sleep every day! im on compy until about 4 am! then i go to sleep until 6 and go to school........pitufituff...im getting off track yeah my favorite part of this fic is where robin blows up and loses his mind i find that utterly hilarious...im such a sick little bastard arent i?
Too bad theres no SEQUEL!!!! *yells last word suggestively in authors face*
person Some guy
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was pretty good. Though i am a little for Robin. But it was his own fault i guess, if your going to continue this i would gladly read more and more! So please make a sequal or something
person angel
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really great I love it I wish you would do another story with them still together and they have a little girl/boy it be so cute, please I know it sounds corny but I think people would really attract to it if it had more emotions in it.
person BrianDarksoul(unsigned)
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An intruiging Second chapter that brings to light the many conflcting emotions of human nature.
Good job!
person Dude
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER.... you write incredible sotires! As long as it would be for an episode! So realistic yet fantasy like! So much Drama! So much intensity! It drives me insane with every paragraph! Your really great at writing stories... well, maybe not the other stories u made but this one is a top 12 stars out of 10! AWESOME work right here!