rate_review Reviews

I have two words to say: Fucking Perfecto! :D

Fuck!! Were you writing a novel?!? Lol, nice way to finish off the story, but I noticed that some of the beginning was unnecessary and repetitive. You described everyone’s emotions, namely Cyborg and BB’s emotions a few too many times. Cyborgs worrying and bad feelings about missing his little brother’s birthday would have been just as effective without describing it more than once.
Lol, you didn’t paint a very flattering picture of Robin in this one either. I doubt how they could even function as a team with as self involved a leader he is. You really hate the pour guy. Your depiction of Cyborg was refreshing and the trinity of love was also really well described, though BB described his love for his goddesses a little too often, never adding anything to what he already stated, but he was well liked. I am still unsure on how to feel about Star and BB, but I could see it as a good thing, but I still can’t figure out why I like it or how it would happen. Good story to read, but it was freaking forever to get through. This could have been a few chapters, easier to manage, but then you lose the whole epilogue idea. ah well. Nice book you have here. Please don't be misinterpret my reaction by my opening lines, I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Really amazing. Looking forward to more of your works.

That was interesting. That touched me in a way that very few peices of work can.

love your stories keep writing

I have read upto it's epolouge.
A well thought out peice of fanfiction.
I am impressed by the depth of charaterisation.
Better than my attempts indubitablly
Kudos.
BrianDarksoul~

is thier going to be a continues to this story becouse i always wanted to find out what would happen if beastboy came into the living room of titans tower with raven and starfire in his arms. what would robin do or say or scream.

Damn, dude. Just.... damn. Think you can bottle that writing ability of yours and sell it on the market? Cuz that would be super.

I have to admit that this type of scenario is pretty interesting. I hope that you can follow up to this (i.e. showing us what life would be like in the Tower with Robin and Cyborg aware of the BB/Rae/Star union going on).

HA! I found you! I said it on FF, now I'll say it here; this fic is fucking awesome

Another amazing story by you. Man!! Its just damn impressive how you write. Hell of a one shot. Thouroghly enjoyed this one mate.