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for You Belongs to ME

by Supermoi

person Flonne
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Purr...another pairing that I like. Lovely job ;)
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This would've been a pretty hot little diddy, but for the excessive amount of typos all through it. To improve on your next story, I'd recommend using a word editing software such as Microsoft word as well as the services of a Beta to proof read.

You do have some budding talent, just need a little help in the grammar.