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person Andy
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a great story, too bad it;'s marred by bad spelling and grammar. Maybe you should pass it through a Spell Check before posting or find yourself someone to proof-read it first. If you write anymore Johfic,fic, I'd be more than willing to check it over for you.
Peace
Andy
person Anonymous
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...Weirdness.
person Fallen
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a great story so far. Please continue ^_^
person chibisan
schedule June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was *sniff* *sniff* b-e-a-utiful! please update soon! there aren't that many JtHM fic out there and hardly any that do the comic justice- nice to see there's one!gringrins evilly* now... you WILL update soon- or do i have to get my Nny-minion after you? no, i didn't think so... *cracks nuckels menacingly*
-lynn
person ryn
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...meow?
that was rather amusing, i must say. me likey.