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for Christmas - Lost and Found

by witeiris

person Rena
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! From the moment you described their little tree, I thought "sounds like he just lopped off the top of one..." and I cackled with glee at how you tied up the ending with that. And the scene where he looked at her with one eye and said "Merry Christmas"-- you made it so easy to visualize, and just so darn good. Aw, now I want more! :D
person Aloe
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job, *snark* esp liked the ending ....
person AJAngelique
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOLOLOL
Loved the ending, loved the story
I WANT MORE!!!