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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent story please update soon
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah that story was hot!!!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story and awesome writing.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a climactic story! But why must it leave me hanging? Finish it, PLEASE.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was pretty damn good! You're wording and everything just makes the story run smoothly. It says at the botton 'to be continued', so I'm really hoping that you update this!
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ho-ho-holy Shit, that was hot! I'm gonna be watching like a hawk for chapter 2. Great work!
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Your great with words, too. Mentioning Mr.Ditokovich(the landlord) was a nice touch, as we don't mind being loud ourselves. It was also funny. Gee...If Peter shoots webbing naturally from his wrists, then what must his...uhm....nevermind.