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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really late to review but i'll do it anyway! very cute story the ending was a little cheesy but cute all the same. the sex was great too but rcome on!... do i really need to point that out? you are a very talented writed, congratulations!!
*silvergirlrox*
*silvergirlrox*
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BATMAN SEX!!!! HOORAY!!!! I <3 Batman sex!!!!! I love you...*glomps your leg and humps it* sorry......*composes self* anyhow..i enjoyed your story and I loved it...Until we meet again!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAWWW!! *sniffle sniffle*
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the hottest stories I've ever read! Every scene practically had me moaning with them (hugs imaginary Bruce and Dick). You're so talented! WRITE MORE NOW!!!! *foams at the mouth*
My only criticism is the ending: I thought it was kind of cheesey for Bruce to ask Dick to marry him. It's just so overdone and doesn't really work with their relationship, in my opinion. I was thinking that (considering your ironic comedy in several previous scenes) you could have the same build-up leading to the proposal and then have it be something completely unexpected (ex. buying new costumes together, or something stupid or out of the ordinary like that). Again, just my opinion.
Again, this is one of the best stories I've read on this and other sites, and you should be extremely proud of yourself!
*copies story into the SECRET folder on PC ^_^*
My only criticism is the ending: I thought it was kind of cheesey for Bruce to ask Dick to marry him. It's just so overdone and doesn't really work with their relationship, in my opinion. I was thinking that (considering your ironic comedy in several previous scenes) you could have the same build-up leading to the proposal and then have it be something completely unexpected (ex. buying new costumes together, or something stupid or out of the ordinary like that). Again, just my opinion.
Again, this is one of the best stories I've read on this and other sites, and you should be extremely proud of yourself!
*copies story into the SECRET folder on PC ^_^*
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww....the ending was really sweet. I always wondered what Dick and Bruce did in the Batcave during their off hours (he he he ;)). This story was HOT...i wouldn't mind getting a piece of Bruce myself. The writing was great, I liked how you put in different point of views. You should write another story where they are married and the adventureas they have together. Just a thought, it'd be interesting to see. Can't wait to read your next installment!