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for A Well Lit Dark

by tmntwriter

person lolahard
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm... Frankly, I'm at a loss for words right now. And I doubt I'll ever be able to express how this story affected me. You've practically pulled my very soul out with it... Scenes of violence were horrible in their intensity, but not too graphic to the poin where you're starting to get really sick. The smut was absolutely perfect. But it's not what made this fic brilliant - it's the Feeling, the Pain, the Love... As much as it pains me to say it, but it was best for future-Mikey to get killed, he'd suffer too much without Julie... As a little P.S., I LOVE this story, and I want to HUG you for writing it, and for making me smile and weep. Good luck to you with your future works, you're a fantastic writer!
person Unolai
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, me again! *waves*

I kinda miss Don and Mickey in this story. And I think the endings weird...No offense, but I don't get it.
person Kash
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the SHELL!!!!....hehe....ok,im fine.Everyone knows it takes more to finnish off William Kash(like boobs)Anyway...a great battle,Raph was cool in this chapter too!So.....now what??Will there be more fighting!?Will there be more smut!?Will there be more.......please post next chapter A.S.A.P!!
person Kash
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well well...this turned out nice babe!but i do have a complaint...Where is kash?that dude is crazy!!lol.....more please??pweety pveeeeeease?
person Kash
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY!!!!shocking!!!more!more!!
person Kash
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really DO like my new powers!!!!!!!!
person Kash
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHH!this is bad!this is bad!!!Kash i mean!!!but a superchapter!!!!!!!!!more!more!more!!
person Kash
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
briiiiilliiiaaant!
person kash
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smashing,baby!smashing.........yeah......we should talk!(lol)
person kash
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH.MY.GOD!!?!!??that was awesome!truly a masterpiece of smut history!marry me baby!lol