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by Kash

person midnightrose
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yo kash smutty as always love it keep it up love kiss kiss hug hug

midnightrose
person shadow
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
looking foward to the next chapter
person tmntwriter
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fine chapter! Keep up the good work!
person Leaphar
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story but your formatting is hard to read. You should consider shorter paragraphs and proper spacing, oh and please lay off the commas.
person tmntwriter
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for smutty chapters!!!!
person Shadow
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, especially ch 3 lol. Can't wait for more, please don't wait to long to update
person tmntwriter
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad so far, this plot has potential!
person tmntwriter
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start at all!! Looking forward to the next chapter