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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This isn't bad! I'm not a big Doom/FF fan, so I was a little confused at parts, but not nearly as much as I should have been, which is a compliment to your skills. Very good job!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Absolutly brillant! I had never thought of Doom that way until this story came along. Bravo!
I can't wait to start reading Lady Doom.
Lisa
I can't wait to start reading Lady Doom.
Lisa
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"steel bustiers"? Is that a highlight for the honeymoon, too? Bravo, you've succeeded in making Doom lovable, and an OFC delightful. I do wish that you had more smut in it.... You should seriously consider having Jovi undress Doom, if only for the sheer oddity of it. I'm very glad you didn't abandon this story early on... I do hope that Jovi gets a good style rating from the Wasp. I'm definitely looking forward to "Lady Doom" and if you haven't read "By the Grace of Lady Vader" with a title like that, you should put it on your to-do list.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it. Good strong characterisation, charm and a plot. Nothing more needed! Looking forward tremendously to the sequel.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Gevaisa!
I enjoyed the story very much - say, do you see a posibility to include "Daredevil" - the blind lawyer Matt Murdock into the sequel? A friend of mine and I, both students of "special education for the blind" had several laughing-fits during the movie and found all the ideas of blindness and compensating super-powers in that movie just hilarious - and I would love to see what you could make out of it!
Thank you, too, for another update of another story! Maybe if you let trouble come step by step and not with one big bang it would be easier to write?
Sincere greetings and best wishes,
awoman
I enjoyed the story very much - say, do you see a posibility to include "Daredevil" - the blind lawyer Matt Murdock into the sequel? A friend of mine and I, both students of "special education for the blind" had several laughing-fits during the movie and found all the ideas of blindness and compensating super-powers in that movie just hilarious - and I would love to see what you could make out of it!
Thank you, too, for another update of another story! Maybe if you let trouble come step by step and not with one big bang it would be easier to write?
Sincere greetings and best wishes,
awoman
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! well done! I really enjoied reading and reviewing this fic I cant wait to read the continuation...hope to see more writing from you soon!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chap 16- Your newest chapters have been anything but displeasing! It's my own habit checking for chapters late at night while my roomie is asleep that curtails my ability to write out the glowing responses they merit in the wee hours of the night.
I think the way Malice simply faded away was a little anti-climatic, but it does serve to give Jovi and Sue something to talk about in common, especially since Jovi was able to do alone what Sue couldn't: drive Malice under. I'm not sure if flashbacks were the best format for the action and adventure sequences like taking Toad out, and while Victor is clearly the main draw for many, his dialogue during the retelling was necesarily limited so that it seemed almost too curt for his character.
But this chapter is extremey nice. The clash of viewpoints was more interesting than any battle that Victor and Magneto could have sustained (kudos for keeping that fight scene short, btw). Peaceful mudanity vs. cataclysmic superheroics is so commonly approached from the other side in the comic books that its nice to see somone come down on the sane side for once. But you continue to tease us with Jovi's aversion to costumes without giving us a concrete or personal reason. Surely there must be one? Also, don't forget your promise of a Valeria appearance! (tho I still stand by my conviction that Jovi's birth mom should crash the party.)
I think the way Malice simply faded away was a little anti-climatic, but it does serve to give Jovi and Sue something to talk about in common, especially since Jovi was able to do alone what Sue couldn't: drive Malice under. I'm not sure if flashbacks were the best format for the action and adventure sequences like taking Toad out, and while Victor is clearly the main draw for many, his dialogue during the retelling was necesarily limited so that it seemed almost too curt for his character.
But this chapter is extremey nice. The clash of viewpoints was more interesting than any battle that Victor and Magneto could have sustained (kudos for keeping that fight scene short, btw). Peaceful mudanity vs. cataclysmic superheroics is so commonly approached from the other side in the comic books that its nice to see somone come down on the sane side for once. But you continue to tease us with Jovi's aversion to costumes without giving us a concrete or personal reason. Surely there must be one? Also, don't forget your promise of a Valeria appearance! (tho I still stand by my conviction that Jovi's birth mom should crash the party.)
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea another wonderful chapter i love the way that victor and jo quote their plays so well i love mcbeth it is my all time fav! and the insult at mags is great along with it keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon!
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rereading chap 3.... Has anyone yet mentioned that it's Noh theatre that has masks, not kabuki? I remember sticking a mental pin in it for later, but I don't think I said anything.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! you need to post another chapter! You must! i offer you many cookies for this, and much praise. I love your character, the effort involved in developing her intelligence (her references and such) must take some time to compile. It is well worth that effort. Do you think at the wedding the superheroes will pull the same stunt as the villains did on on the Reeds wedding? Will Joviana start her own school for metahumans to turn them into doctors, writers, messengers and the like? Having Dr. Doom as a funder would piss oh so many heroes off as well as be completely within the bounds of moral behaviour. Are we going to meet up again with Sue? Oh, (sorry lots of ideas from this) is Joviana going to show Sue the errors of her husband's ways?
arg! and lastly please post soon!
much luv
xidaer
arg! and lastly please post soon!
much luv
xidaer