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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow......I step out for a couple of days and 2 more chaptors get added :P
The storyline is realy developing in leaps and bounds. Nifty. And the insertion of a villian character should spice things up nicely :)
As to the Honeymoon.......I would think Doom would choose to vacation in his native country. Possibly in some secluded mountain getaway or somesuch. Possibly something put together specificly for the Honeymoon. I seriously doubt he would go to another country for it.
Anyways a Great Great series thus far.
The storyline is realy developing in leaps and bounds. Nifty. And the insertion of a villian character should spice things up nicely :)
As to the Honeymoon.......I would think Doom would choose to vacation in his native country. Possibly in some secluded mountain getaway or somesuch. Possibly something put together specificly for the Honeymoon. I seriously doubt he would go to another country for it.
Anyways a Great Great series thus far.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. honeymoon id say somewhere with a little adventure like in the wild but a place that victor owns or has an aquatince with would be neat somewhere close to home but not far away and also you can throw in the F4 to mix things up a bit maybe leadthem somwhere wild or something this is just me rambling keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon :-)
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffhanger!! Thats a pretty unique way to make someone disappear before their wedding day- can't wait to see how Doom manages to figure out she's been 'taken' by 'Malice', that's when Doom isn't so angry (maybe they'll have *really* angry sex if he rescues her? There's nothing more gratious than angry sex!!! XD)
Anyway, I digress!!
*ahem*
You're going to send them on a honeymoon? *thinks* This is a difficult one with a personality like Doom's. I think they'll both settle for somewhere quiet in another part of Europe... but that's no fun!! I agree with the reviewer above- somewhere like New York could end up being a perfect setting for somewhere quite dramatic! What other place could evil villains thrive in besides the Big Apple, even if they are on a honeymoon? ^_~
Anyway, I digress!!
*ahem*
You're going to send them on a honeymoon? *thinks* This is a difficult one with a personality like Doom's. I think they'll both settle for somewhere quiet in another part of Europe... but that's no fun!! I agree with the reviewer above- somewhere like New York could end up being a perfect setting for somewhere quite dramatic! What other place could evil villains thrive in besides the Big Apple, even if they are on a honeymoon? ^_~
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Soulshard drags herself back onto the site* "Must...review...Minion..."
First of all i really must apologize for my sparse reviews (stupid work gets in the way of my reading time) i promise more in the future.Now on with the review i love the careful in which you are building up to the wedding day, the dress,cake and the jewellery i'm guessing that its going to be a day to remember.As for where to send them on their honeymoon that is difficult i suppose the old favorite Paris would be ok as long as they stayed away from the Riviera or Niagara Falls is quite popular i think.
P.s Thankyou for the mention, it made me feel special (hugs).
First of all i really must apologize for my sparse reviews (stupid work gets in the way of my reading time) i promise more in the future.Now on with the review i love the careful in which you are building up to the wedding day, the dress,cake and the jewellery i'm guessing that its going to be a day to remember.As for where to send them on their honeymoon that is difficult i suppose the old favorite Paris would be ok as long as they stayed away from the Riviera or Niagara Falls is quite popular i think.
P.s Thankyou for the mention, it made me feel special (hugs).
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Doom is one of those tragic characters who needs much and refuses to show it. This entire concept is fantastic (no pun intended) and I cannot wait until the future chapters. I think you should have them have a honeymoon in New York City. That would be very dramatic.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, Impressive! Even the smut reveals more about the stories, and even more about the characters. If only other authors caught onto the idea of 'characterization thru gratuitous nudity'... While the first night was very well written, I couldn't see Jovi really foregoing all initiative in bed, and its nice to see that Doom is not completely dependent on handcuffs to have any fun. I feel very lucky to have stumbled across such a good fic while it was still in the works; usually I come late to the party. Is every day until the wedding going to be covered in as much detail as these last chapters were? Also, any plans for observing the tradition of bride and groom not seeing each other the day before the wedding?
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea smut chapter :-) i really like the personalities that you are bringing out with victor it is really cute i guess he makes up for the fact of being ticklish with tickling others huh? keep up the wonder work and i hope to see another chapter up from you soon!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It gets better and better. :)
The story line you are weaving about her is quite intricate, and exceptionally well done. You seem to actually be writing the storyline around Her. A true rarity in adult fanfiction.
The story line you are weaving about her is quite intricate, and exceptionally well done. You seem to actually be writing the storyline around Her. A true rarity in adult fanfiction.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey another great chapter cant wait for the action in the next one love the personalities that are betryed in this one keep up the great work and hope to see another up soon! :-)
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh! There's nothing nicer than a romantic evening with a certain armoured gentleman!! *glomps Dr. Doom* Especially when he lighten's up in places! This is a *great* lead up to some graphic smut- eagerly awaiting yet another chapter!!! ^^