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It's getting better with time :)

This story is going places with Doom that I didn't think possible, and holding onto his character at the same time. Joviana is incredibly intriguing, especially the hints about her unhappy childhood and her plans for using Doom as "her lever." The ways she deals with him, working around his arrogance while still recognizing his strengths bodes very, very well for whatever she's up to, and I really want to see more interactions between the two of them. I really *like* her as a character; she compliments Doom very well, and despite her clear intentions to use him to some unspecified end, she doesn't seem unscrupulous or manipulative. She might just be as internally complex as Vic himself. Basically, this whole review boils down to one phrase: PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I like where you seem to be going with this. Not many authors can convey such good descriptions to the readers. Excellent writing- hope to see more!

An excelent work of erotic fiction. Quite possibly the best I have encountered thus far on this site.

Loved the way you portrayed Dr. Doom in this fic! It would be great if you could continue, even if there was less smut. I'd love to see how Dr. Doom reacted if the lady got cold feet about the wedding and tried to run off! ^^

I'm curious. Do write more. Doom seems a little off. Not his maniacal self, but perhaps a few more chapters might display how he reacts at home as opposed when he is locked in his Epic Passionate Hateful Rivalry with Richards / Must Take Over the World Until I'm Bored – mode.

And if you are the type to write slash... how about a Viktor/Reed fic one of these days? You're a good writer.

This is a wonderful story. You've captured Doom's characteristics perfectly and you should most defintly continue this story! Good work :)

very nice! i can't wait to see the next chapter.