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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to see some S&M here with the girls "punishing" Spidey for how he's been acting. Y'know typical stuff, whips and hot-candle wax dripping. I've been trying to find some Spider-Man lemons that aren't YOAI but have two or three uber-sexy ladies "punishing" Peter. If you want to throw in a third lady, may I recommend Emma Frost, I always thought she was so hot in that white-leather dominatrix outfit. Or maybe Jessica Drew, the current Spider-Woman in the orange and yellow outfit. This way you've got a red-head, a brunette, and a platnum blond. Of course I've always been wanting to see a good Spider-Man/Black Widow lemon, I'm talking about top-heavy redhead Natasha Romanova here, not that blond a cup smaller Yvonna. Good luck and I hope you continue with this trend.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on! I HATE those author notes chapters, can't you just put that in a new chapter and NOT get our hopes up? Personally I want to see more of this story as fast as you can make it.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mj a sex slave to peter and/or felcia um bring in electra, mj is felicas partner in crime , um mj and felica deside to share peter, mj becomes a nypo
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow relly cool fic you got here, I just started to read it and damn this is good stuff. Well as for ideas you've hadn't had Peter/MJ just ot themselves other then just plowjobs that is. So how about MJ decides to take a little Peter for herself? And if Peter wanted to get a little 'revenge' on the girls by webbing them up and having his way with them might be fun for later as well. Then how about a full on three way with all of them taking part in some form or another?
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot... very hot. loved it
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, this story is kinda nice, so yea... i'm happy with it! =)
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I can definitely understand where your coming from, Arcade. Both on your time point and your point about the reasons we come here. At any rate, I hope you find your muse soon and continue, but I know these things take time sometimes, so I can fully understand why it might take a while. Just do the best job you can as soon as you feel inspired. That's all I ask. :)
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How about something more on MJ bashing for the way she's been treating peter?
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd donate ideas, except I'd be rather embarrassed to see my name attached to this. Porn without plot is all well and good, but you could do a lot better than this without abandoning the general idea you've had.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a response to the person who apparantly did not enjoy this story as much as the rest of you.
For the record, I realize the latest couple chapters of this story haven't been very plot driven, and I'll tell you why. If you're going to write a story heavy smut story you're going to need to do a few things, devote more time to write more, which I don't feel like doing, and/or cut out some sex scenes to develop the story more, which I won't do because I know the sex is the only reason 90% of people come to AFF. I find it hard to believe that people come here for an award winning story, because I know they don't, and I have plenty of stories as evidence to prove my point. Also, if this were a One-shot then not only would I want a decent, moderately believeable story, I'd expect it. However, writting chapter upon chapter and still holding together a decent storyline would take more time than I am willing to devote. For me this isn't even a hobby, it's just something I do when I either can't do my other hobbies or am so sick of them I need to do something else. I just write these people I know that not only will I enjoy this story, but plenty of other people will. I expect people to come to the table seeing this as what it is, masturbation material. If you didn't find it enjoyable I can see why you wouldn't, though I think if you are going to criticize my story for not having enough plot then you should have a look around AFF first, and if you're going to criticize my story, then I think there are thousands more that you need to do the same to.
For the record, I realize the latest couple chapters of this story haven't been very plot driven, and I'll tell you why. If you're going to write a story heavy smut story you're going to need to do a few things, devote more time to write more, which I don't feel like doing, and/or cut out some sex scenes to develop the story more, which I won't do because I know the sex is the only reason 90% of people come to AFF. I find it hard to believe that people come here for an award winning story, because I know they don't, and I have plenty of stories as evidence to prove my point. Also, if this were a One-shot then not only would I want a decent, moderately believeable story, I'd expect it. However, writting chapter upon chapter and still holding together a decent storyline would take more time than I am willing to devote. For me this isn't even a hobby, it's just something I do when I either can't do my other hobbies or am so sick of them I need to do something else. I just write these people I know that not only will I enjoy this story, but plenty of other people will. I expect people to come to the table seeing this as what it is, masturbation material. If you didn't find it enjoyable I can see why you wouldn't, though I think if you are going to criticize my story for not having enough plot then you should have a look around AFF first, and if you're going to criticize my story, then I think there are thousands more that you need to do the same to.