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Make em fuck all together, but keep spidy tied tight, hehe

MAMA-MIA!! Downright great stuff. I wish I could think of some more stuff, but I'm strapped for ideas at present. I have to say though, you did a terrific job on this chapter. I'm definitely going to be very gladly awaiting more of this if you can think of anything. :)

Whoa, mama! I can't believe I missed a chapter due to real life. Oh well. Definitely some good stuff. Maybe some Femdom F/M BDSM when Pete wakes up.... completely naked and bound to a bed by either an extra-strong batch of his own webbing or some other extremely strong restraints the Black Cat had made to be able to hold him despite his superhuman strength. Of course, if you don't like the idea, you don't have to do it, but somehow that would seem almost just like BC to semi-realistically pull something like that in an NC-17 story.... get Peter so aroused as to be caught off-guard by the nutshot and then place him in a position where he would be helpless to do anything but enjoy what she had in store for him next. :)


If you like the idea, I'll let your imagination fill in the other blanks. If not, I'm sorry for wasting your time.

Awesome, I loved all of it please write more!! Sunday is too far away!

After reading the current ultimate arcs. And semi-following the classic books for a few years now. I'm starting to not like MJ to much. Spiderman really needs a superhero girlfriend. And from the books with Blackcat i've read all Peter has to do is say the word and they'd be together. She really regrets letting the man she loved get away. She just made a mistake, and frankly I always thought the does she like me or my alter ego line in comics was mostly stupid. Keep writing love the story. Good mix of erotic and story. Plus any kind of BCat/peter story is good at thus point. But hey with MJ being temporarily out of the picture BCat and Peter have a chance in ultimate.

WHOA! Most definitely a very good piece of work so far. Love the Spidey/BC pairing and the mixture of hot and heavy sex and drama. I definitely wouldn't mind further chapters. Heck, maybe one of the later chapters could have one of them using Spidey's web-shooters to web the other one to a bed (no preference which one, but I could see Spidey whipping up an EXTRA-strong batch of web fluid in preparation one way or the other). Of course, that's just a suggestion; you don't have to use it if you don't want to. Whether you use it or not, I'm still eagerly looking forward to more.

Honestly, I think this is definetly one of the BEST fanfic ever written with spider-man. I just LOVE this pairing how what you've done with it and made it more than just a scene. Definetly keep up the great work.

This is story is simply beautiful!

Black Cat+Spiderman is a far better pairing than MJ and Peter Parker/Spiderman. More!

BEST FIC EVER! CONTINUE PLEASE too much potential to lose here