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for For whom the bell tolls

by CSwindle

person Satanicmidget
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dammit! There just isn't enough Shredder stories.

Well awesome effort so far. I'm hooked and drooling for more, even though it's only 3 chapters long. Spelling is good and so is grammer. And writing from Rocksteady's POV was inspired. I haven't seen that anywhere, so keep it up.

Hmm I don't really know what else to say here...Umm just the usual. Great idea and well written. I hope you finnish it, I'm looking forwards to a long(ish) ride.

Satanicmidget
person Satanicmidget
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And I just noticed someone else using this handle. I hate that, damn unoriginal stealers.... sorry neither time nor place. So to clarify...

Satanicmidget a.k.a Kristy (the Aussie)
person Lainy
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT DOESN'T SUCK!!! NOT AT ALL!!
Go on.. Go on... :D
Please.

It is realls great.
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story has started off pretty damn good..you have to continue dammit!
and by the way..dont worry so much about reviews (as nice and fuzzy as they are) you should focus on the hits as well..
person Satanic Midget
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and yeah my nickname is Satanic Midget lol