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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pleased to see Lasso Girl is still at large which gives possibilities for a return to form for this story. Personally I think Chapter 17 brought in too many other Superheroes and descended into a free-for-all with no characterisation. Supergirl's pointless rage appeared out of sync with her previous manifestations.
I enjoyed thee coolly calculating villainesses who were always one step ahead of their foes and the pace of previous chapters.
Perhaps Lasso Girl can bring us back to that? be a shame to end what has been a brilliant story at where it is now.
(Thanks for all the work, though — it's been a great read overall)
I enjoyed thee coolly calculating villainesses who were always one step ahead of their foes and the pace of previous chapters.
Perhaps Lasso Girl can bring us back to that? be a shame to end what has been a brilliant story at where it is now.
(Thanks for all the work, though — it's been a great read overall)
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Disappointing...so much more was expected and hoped for. More more more resulted in an ending of less less less. I can only hope that you redeem yourself in Part 2, particularly allowing for Alexandra's revenge considering in chapter 16 she said the powers weren't fading...think of what she can become and lead against the has-been heroes.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoaaa! Chapter 17 seems to have disappeared.
No offence but I hope it's being reworked. Most readers I know are keen to see our villainesses triumph!!!!!
No offence but I hope it's being reworked. Most readers I know are keen to see our villainesses triumph!!!!!
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very disappointing ending. Hoping for something better.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey - great work on Girls Night Out - will there be any more chapters?
All the scene's with Kara are hot, esp the ones between her and Kal or her and Bruce.
Keep up the great work
All the scene's with Kara are hot, esp the ones between her and Kal or her and Bruce.
Keep up the great work
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter better than the last...with Alexandra holding onto all that power and feeling so good while draining...one last drink from Supergirl and she'll own her. Then All of them, Supes, Bats, Nightwing will all fall to the new Generation Goddesses. .The two of them would be unstoppable...who's next? And there's still the unaddressed issues of what may hapen to Tangle from all her intimacy with Supes More...more...more
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is so hot...i only hope that we don't have to wait 3-4 months for every new chapter.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its all so unfair but so damn sexy bravo!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Think of what alexandra can become drinking so many different people...supe...marvel..supergirl...who is to say that her abilities wont multiply and become more permanent...i can only hope nightwing falls as easily as bats and birdboy did. too much to let go here...get supergirl's mind back on alexandra and wasting the has-been men heroes. Girl goddesses are the future...dont' let it end. More more more......
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is just too hot to let these goddesses of power find defeat. Don't let these male has-beens defeat the new generation of sexy super power. So much still to develop about what may happen to any of the goddesses that seduced ole supe. Supergirl loves Alexandra's taste and can't be happpy that Marvel is still standing and what he is doing to her. Lasso, Lace & Tangle must have something evil and devious up their sleeves (or at least in their costumes). Please don't cut this short with some kind of fairy tale happy ending. Girl Goddesses rule. More, more more!