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Oh, my dear. You are sadly mistaken converning the lack of male attention. I have been a devoted follower since chapter 3 of Minion. My Y just hasn't been eloquent enough to add anything to what is being contributed by others. Your's is the first story I check in on when I log on. Phooey on Marvel - yours is better.

hi again loved this chapter remainded me of my gramps that passed on two years ago he was the kidder of the family like were this story is going keep up on the background information as we go along it really makes the story more understandable for the readers well that is all for now hope to see another chapter up from you soon!

Interesting new chapter-- I think the jolts from Jovi are nice. She's starting to see Victor as "her Victor" more and thinks less of him in terms of Doom (a natural hormonal reaction if nothing else- though the presence of mind remains around him as Dr. Doom and she knows what he's fully capable of, she is his mate and the connections --both chemical and associative-- in her mind would alter due to it)-- the realization that little Victor could intimidate people just as easily as big Victor was played out nicely. It's a little icewater for a thinking woman, not a cold realization for a girl caught in things beyond her depth. As a reader I appreciate well-thought out icewater for sharp women-- especially used in places where another writer would just plop down into stereotypical romantic slush. Jovi knows what she's doing and I welcome the coming storm after this rosy lull. Lulls are nice, but Jovi is made of steel not moonbeams. She is a woman of action. I will continue to read avidly. Excelsior! (BTW: I really hate to burst your bubble, but I am not male. The reference is actually to the Spindoctors and Frank Zappa.)

hi again loved the chappie yea a undisclosed honeymoon sound fun! love the way you gave jo and vic their personalities and then explain the back ground information on them very good! hope they kick imposter ass soon so they can get on with their lives and the wedding? TTFN ~nat

Well... I've got to give it to you. This has been a good read throughout the whole thing (including the first story). Normally I just sort of breeze around here to see what's going on and not much more- but your story is worth following. Being a merry marvelite for a long time (though, sadly, not much anymore. I buy reprints of the old stuff -mostly), I can appreciate a lot of the extra touches you add here and there. Very nice. Please continue on and I too want to know what 'Lady Doom' said to Victor in Hell... but you just keep teasing us with the info, dangit.

hi tis nat this chapter cleared up some of my confusion on why there is this alternate group of human i think that they are human and that they represent people who are no longer in victor's life but now it is getting interesting that htye can track them and figure them out, victor is very well represented and i like the way that you had him come up with the scanner to make it known who is who in this story... anywho keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon! :-)

hi again tis nat hope all is well on your end this was a somewhat puzzling chapter but it makes a point with jean and her being the phoenix and all that hope that this doubles things is put to rest cuz if i was victor i would let my double have it, get jo's ring back and live happily ever after but that is only in fairytales huh? i like. hope to see more chapter up from you soon! :-)

YEA MISSED PILLS SCENE! go Jo hope all turns out well inthe end for her... it must be great fun for them to watch the imposters do their duties and try to be the real them hope to see more chapter up from you soon im really enjoying this storyline you write very well! :-)

Hi again a great chapter really cleared things up for me, now i really understand the imposters and the realscharacters feelings good job with that by the way... to see the supposed valaria at the feet of her maid would be funny yea the weddings coming soon hope that Jo is preggers cuz that would make a splendid wedding gift for victor hope to see another chapter up from you soon until then keep up the great writing and cya in the next chapter! :-)

Yea SUMT! :-) loved the chappie and i can just see the bed breaking too funny keep up the great writing and hope to see wedding bells in the future? keep it up this is getting good!!!