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Yea SMUT! loves the chappie *give homemade cookie* keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon!

Hi again! liked this chappie really got to see the posessive fatherly side of victor reminds me a lot of my Da with the fact that I am and only child and was very protected when growing up in this crazy world hope to see the smut in the future until then keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon! :-)

Poor jo what a life and a unique family situation yea the smut will probibly help her and hopefully we hear about victor life? he is a interesting character so i look forward to reading about it keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon! :-)

hi again loved this chapter miss the smut but hopefully it will happen soon? like the information about Jo gaising and how she lived before she became aquainted with victor i understand about his face it is what keep the story moving hope to see more chapters form you ssoon! :-)

Oh, dear, I did disappear on you... :( I'm still reading, I still think you're doing great work. Yay Fruitbasket! Yay Sue Reed not being a total bimbo about how good Jovi and Doom are for each other. I am really, really pleased to finally be getting to something about Jovi's past and her mother! The cuteness of Doctor Strange is not to be underestimated, either. I want to know what Jovi told Doom! gr. The disparity between the accounts seems very large, and I wish there were more explaination of it. Or, at the very least, Jovi were somehow able to regain her memory of it, since it seems it would only help boost her self-esteem. The issues of Doom raising children are incredibly cute, and Jovi's past is certainly holding up her fears of being a mother. Please don't Doom take all the credit for the possibility of correctly diagnosing Jovi's mom: jovi's too smart not to have researched things herself, at the very least to try and figure out whether the mental illness in question could appear in Jovi herself. All in all, very good job. I know I'm leaving out some very well deserved complements because I'm not posting enough, but don't let that stop you. You're doing very interesting things with the characters. Only, MORE DOOM.

Hi again for the magicla transform I always thought the beast was cute so jow ould love him no matter what as you say I like the cat story I had a cat like that when I was young her name was boots and she was a stray in which we fed and took care of she died at apporx. 17 1/2 yrs so she had a happy life like the background story of Jo really brought out her character hope to see another chapter up from you soon love this story. :-)

Yea SMUT! :) loved the chppie hope to see more like that soon will jo ever see what victor looks like you could do a beauty and the beast thing as a suggestion with the way the world is these days she would be wise to not judge him much and it would add a whole new level to their love... just a suggestion love the plot hope to hear more about jo in the future keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon! :-)

Hey loved the chappie! im a bit halloweened out from the haunted house but this really made my day thanks like the way that you described the way that hell is and the stage divers pov really fits well with it if you have ever been to and Ozzfest you would really know what it is all about keep up the great writing and hope to see more form you soon! :-)

hi again! loved the chappie and thanks for the warning poor jo going to hell is one thing but returning to it does not sound like fun to me... keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up form you soon!
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Dear Gevaisa,

you !are! a fantastic writer, know that!

Still, I would say: the viev on the meals would fit into another story better... ;-)

Sincere greetings,
awoman - deeply fascinated