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Great story. I'm still hoping she'll fall in love with Leo.

Great story, keep up the great job.

I remember what you wrote in your blogger explaining this story about Raph and Carrie and Leo. I'm curious What's the part Leo's going to play? It looks pretty hopeless for him now if he really loved Carrie. Carrie and Raph look together now.

Well, good job!
Please update soon! :)

I love this story so much! Keep writing; it's coming along great!

AWESOME chapter! Rofl... I hope Barry doesn't freak out. Keep writing! This is an amazing story! I hope Raph grows up and they find their family safe and intact! :)

Write more! Write more!

I LOVE this story! Please keep it up; you're doing a fantastic job!

Hi, I read the review that you wrote about my story and reading your recent addition to your story I have to admit you're right. My story could fit in yours. How bizzare is that? I never even got to read the new chapter when I finished mine. Anyway, I do like how this is going. Keeps getting dirtier. Me likes.

WOW! You're a very talented writer. This story is so good. Every chapter is better than the last so keep 'em coming! I can't wait!!

Right!! Just some action already please!!

lol This was a hilarious chapter! I loved the Raph/Leo interaction, with Raph getting stuck in the window and his later crack about Leo being sexually frustrated. Barry seemed kinda cool, and his and Carrie's conversation leads me to believe that her ex will play a role in later chapters. Looking forward to that, actually. And it was nice to see Raph softening up to Carrie, at least a little. I'm beginning to have suspicions that there is a love triangle in the making here. Which would be great fodder for drama and later sexual tension, I think.

Nice work as always, and I hope to read more soon! ^_^