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for Perseverance

by EvaBrick

person dragon85
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up please!! But some "action" already please!!
person Mo
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not much of a reviewer (though eventually I hope to y'know...do it more), but I gotta say...I LOVED that last chapter. Don't get to see Donnie kick ass nearly enough!
person ffdemon
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope this asshole have understand the message : NEVER touch Doonie's girlfriend.
Way to go Don-san, take care of Charlie ;)
The scene in the bath was so great.

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person Sarah
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story, I can't wait to read more!
person ffdemon
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man, so many new chapter...I can barly cath up....but it ok
Really nice
Continue your great work
take care
person dragon85
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! More please!!
person ffdemon
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'M sure that Charlie don't have to worry to be alone now...i think that a purple bandana wearing turle that we both know will help her.

really nice
Continu your great work
take care
person ffdemon
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really nice,
Finaly a story on donnie :D,
please more soon ;)