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for Perseverance

by EvaBrick

schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! XD
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go Donnie GO!! XD Rescue your lady fair! X3
person ShelbyO
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Adrenaline rush! Im lovin it
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O,O Oh, please tell me the guys get to the girls before anything happens to them!! Please update soon! I'm on the edge of my seat!! XD
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O,O Uh, oh...Donnie mad! Most excellent chapter! XD
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great; I read it all in one sitting. It's inspired me to write my own Turtles fanfic about my favorite one (hint: RED). I probably won't post mine, as your will just put it shame. :D

Again, this is excellent, I hope you post more soon.
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O,O OMG! What's going to happen next?! I'm on the edge of my seat! lol
person lolahard
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shell! Disaster doesn't come alone, does it? :( Now I need to know what happened next.
The scene with the coffin almost made me weep. Seriously. It's so thoughtful of Donnie to go through so much trouble and make something like that for Master Splinter.
Can't wait for more!
person ShelbyO
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh man! That sucks. I feel like lisa was just being irresponsible but its prolly something more plot efficient...
person lolahard
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, not the shop! =0 Now Charlie's gonna have really tough time in her life :(
I wonder who did this. And what happened to Lisa? She doesn't seem like the type who doesn't follow their promises...
And by the way, the previous chapter was absolutely yummy ^_^ I read it twice. Because I freaking like it.
Waiting for more impatiently!