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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, I know it has been a long time since you have updated, but I sincerely hope you continue with this through into book 3. A change in dynamics would be nice, they changed from book 1 to 2, so seems rather appropriate. (And things must go in three's) Been reading this book since 2006, and just keep coming back hoping for more. It is one of the best written fictions I have stumbled across, love what you have done with the characters, love the story line, love the writing. Please keep up the amazing work.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
This has come a long way from where it started (and I'm sure so have you). In never really saw Otto as a threat, but your powerful depiction of him is changing my mind.
Ginny is a very interesting and compelling character. As her will gets broken she becomes more of a plot device than a character, and just when I just when I think she's about to be a meat puppet for the sinister four, she suprises me.
I saw post the rest of the story here and come back and finish it once you have an ending you like.
Kepp up the dark work,
SBJ
This has come a long way from where it started (and I'm sure so have you). In never really saw Otto as a threat, but your powerful depiction of him is changing my mind.
Ginny is a very interesting and compelling character. As her will gets broken she becomes more of a plot device than a character, and just when I just when I think she's about to be a meat puppet for the sinister four, she suprises me.
I saw post the rest of the story here and come back and finish it once you have an ending you like.
Kepp up the dark work,
SBJ
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is probably The best story i've read here on adult fanfic net, even though it is very dark it is absolutely brilliant, can't wait to see the next update
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, I have really enjoyed this story! I love your writing! Keep this up!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chappy again! Keep up the good work!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, there should be more people reviewing this. Stupid lazy peoples... Anywhos, great chappy again! Keep it up! Oh, and a happy new year to you too!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, Merry Christmas!
Another great chapter, keep it up!
Another great chapter, keep it up!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry.. ^^ I've been thinking to write a new review for a long time, but since I'm from Finland I'm not that good writing in english. Reading is a different thing, though.
Well, what can I say.. I love the story, I'm really hooked on it. ;) I check almost every day for updates. Yesh, keep it up.. o_O Don't stop the story. I bet there's a lot of people who read your fic but are too lazy to write a review, which I think is wrong.. :< Constructive critism and comments are the thing which keeps one (me at least) drawing and writing and such of things.
Like I said before, you're an awesome writer but it's hard for me to give comments because of my english.. Well, you don't babble about things, like what sort of jeans and what patterns there were on the towel. That sort of things. Like you don't give too my details, and you seem to give room for readers own imagination. And that is a good thing. :) I don't know what negative things I could say.. Hmm.. Well, I can't come up with anything. ^^'' I'm not a writer (I draw) so I can't (don't know how to) give much critics.
I don't have any suggestions to you.. Just write like you want it. Everything seems to twist nicely and suprisingly. Like, I think think of something else and it goes the other, much better, way. Heh, sorry if I explain this strangely but you understand my vocabulary problem.. e_e
To write this review I saw lot of effort, since I have a depression and I'm like 'paralyzed' and I can't get nearly anything done. But this proves that the fic is so awesome that I really had to write something to you. ;D
Btw, Merry Christmas!
Well, what can I say.. I love the story, I'm really hooked on it. ;) I check almost every day for updates. Yesh, keep it up.. o_O Don't stop the story. I bet there's a lot of people who read your fic but are too lazy to write a review, which I think is wrong.. :< Constructive critism and comments are the thing which keeps one (me at least) drawing and writing and such of things.
Like I said before, you're an awesome writer but it's hard for me to give comments because of my english.. Well, you don't babble about things, like what sort of jeans and what patterns there were on the towel. That sort of things. Like you don't give too my details, and you seem to give room for readers own imagination. And that is a good thing. :) I don't know what negative things I could say.. Hmm.. Well, I can't come up with anything. ^^'' I'm not a writer (I draw) so I can't (don't know how to) give much critics.
I don't have any suggestions to you.. Just write like you want it. Everything seems to twist nicely and suprisingly. Like, I think think of something else and it goes the other, much better, way. Heh, sorry if I explain this strangely but you understand my vocabulary problem.. e_e
To write this review I saw lot of effort, since I have a depression and I'm like 'paralyzed' and I can't get nearly anything done. But this proves that the fic is so awesome that I really had to write something to you. ;D
Btw, Merry Christmas!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, I love this story! Keep it up!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much...I think it would be interesting if Norman pulled something on Otto in front of Ginny, surprising both of them. Just a thought. Love the fic, keep it up!