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for To Make a Concubine

by anacsadder

person hibimo
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good, i've really enjoyed it. i like the way you write, really much! i've read all your fics on this site.. <,<
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kinky,

I'm trying to feel it but I'm just not that dark.
Your characterizations are good, Otto is a menace to be reckoned with.
After what he's done to Ginny though...

I think I need to go cry in the shower.
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your fic, please keep it on