rate_review Reviews

May i ask, why whenever i try to read this, i never get the full story, i only get the disclaimer bit, and then it stops. i cannot read the story

End. Reading just PWP, which is what this could potentionally turn into, would be lame. But if you think you can keep it interesting, I'm all up for it.

First off your amazing writer, and i look forward to seeing more from you. Keeping this going could prove interesting, but you've also left it a good stopping place. Might be interesting to see some Peter MJ action picking up or branching off of this in a different fic.

I enjoyed very much your little side comments by Spidey(he always has a witty line), as well as the interactions with Gwen, and MJ. You really could feel the love with MJ and Peter, and that's pretty cool, because I really enjoy them as a couple (F you Joe Quesada)

I think you've done a great job, and this wasn't just the classic fuck fic, you added more to it. Kudos!

MORE MORE MORE!!!

More would be cool. But can you seriously tone down Peter constantly feeling awkward because of Mary Jane less?

It got annoying after the 2nd chapter.

*gasp*
I got distracted in the Resident Evil section and missed two updates? Not just one, but TWO?
Well, I'm all caught up now, and I'm still digging the way you write. I love the sidethoughts from Peter, you've managed to capture his humor. And the pace of the scenes is great, I don't like rushed scenes.
Despite my bias for super-villains, if you write more, I will read it. Though, I'm not sure where else there is to fill in considering Gwen's fate. I can't remember how long it was between this and the Carnage story, though, because I read those a long time ago. Anyway, like I said, if you find more to write, I will keep reading.

love the story.it couuld end here I guess. but I think you could keep it going. id like to read more. its a great story

I would love to see more

Damn! That was really something. I liked it. It was very sexy and entertaining. Not to mention downright funny at times! lol The whole bit with MJ turning Gwen gay was really something. I can understand her thought process, but I can't help but wonder if that's a genuine fear of Gwen. MJ sure doesn't seem to mind though. lol That part with her dwelling on Liz was hilarious! So now Gwen gets Peter to herself. I can't wait to see that! You really know how to draw these things out and I'm loving every minute of it. Any chance Kitty Pryde could work her way in at one point? just a thought. Keep up the great work! Slickboy out.

glad to see your back. was pleased to have the new chapter. I enjoyed the whole "if a girl makes you come your gay" did you make that up or is that a rule somewhere. it sounds like a "one time at band camp" kind of thing. anyway glad your back. and keep it up.