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damn supe this fic rulz i meen i love the ultimate spiey and the threesome fic idea was brillient i know i cant spell but still i am a fan fic writer and i was about to quit as my writing skills suk but reading this turned me back on to writing i love this fic and can not wait much longer for an update god!!!!!!!!!!
ps:my girl loves fan-fics but hates adult stuff you got her turned on to it and she is horney as hell after reading them so i thank you from the bottem of my heart thank you!!!!

aka Kinky Penguin
Webbing bondage, you did listen to me!
I like the way you did MJ. When Peter was thinking that thing about Doc Ock taking notes, I knew he was going to catch the wrongness in that thought. As a fangirl, though, I have to say that Doc Ock could nibble cake off my body any day *dopey grin*

Really good work, I have thouroughly(sp?) enjoyed reading this story and I am looking foward to the next installment.

I've never read the Ultimate imprints of any Marvel comic, but I really enjoyed this fic. Any chance of a sequel, or maybe just an epilogue? Not just for the smut, but I'm interested in the emotional fallout of this encounter, especially between Peter and Gwen. Would she have stopped him, or just told him the truth and gone ahead and done it? Keep up the good work.

Man... That was excellently written, and very interesting... This one seems to be finished, but I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your works.

Oh, I am so glad to see a continuation of this one! I didn't expect what happened with Gwen at all - and I thought you handled it really well.

The conversation with Johnny at the end - loved it! Wouldn't it be fun to write the one with Crystal and her sister!

I just noticed the title says "form" instead of "from." Might want to fix that.
I was reading over some other reviews, and I just thought I'd say, though Tangled Web and Missing Panels are both equally good, I love "nasty, harsh, and disturbing" fics (if anyone who's read my stuff hasn't figured that out =p). Not knocking this one by any means, but in real life a threesome seems rather ordinary. Since this is fiction, I like to really push the limits of sex scenes.
Oooh, maybe you could add some webbing bondage... That could be fun... Like he could web MJ to the ceiling and then they could have sex on the ceiling... Dunno what Gwen would do during that, though...
Anyway, transition end. Kinky Penguin, over and out.

DUDE ADD A NEXT CHAPTER!!!! MJ/GS LESBO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice story thus far. I look forward to seeing more.

Chapter 2

This chapter is too good! Man, you MUST continue this! I'm awaiting it eagerly! :)