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I'd love to see some venom and spider-man action, especially both ways (V/S and S/V)!

Yay another update! I can't wait for the explaination of Peter's new power in the next chapter. I hope that Pete learns to harness his hot boy sexiness to defete those awfull villins. Also I really want to know what flash's mutation is.^-^

Man, you're keeping the story hot, I have to respect that. Definitely cool with the weird positions and Peter's inner monologues. You have a good handle on everyone you're writing. Keep up the good work, Naughty.

--z

It's wonderful! More PeterFlash please!

Sorry man, I should have reviewed after the first chapter, I totally loved where it was going. Your version of the Flash/Peter pairing is my absolute favorite and I love the way you treat the dialoge. Their 'voices' sound just the way they do in the comic. Excellent work. I also agree with cassandra's assesment of the pheromone concept, though I was bothered by Peter's lack of response to cheating on Flash, that it wasn't him doing it but spiderman instead sounds like a copout that I wouldn't expect from the character, it'd be more realistic for him to be freaked out that he *wasn't* more freaked out about it than he was, also I kinda feel like it trivializes his feelings for flash. But it's your fic, so your choice.

Your writing and plot choices are great, I love what your doing with this and if you don't have any problem with it I may like to steal the idea of flash being a mutant in a peter/flash fic of my own sometime. Can I, pleeaaase??

Osborne Sr. is a sicko, I'd really like to see harry get his mind back and get revenge on him, he totally deserves it. Esp since in the ultimate verse poor Harry isn't as crazy as the original comics or movie, he's actually a nice kid, maybe Flash and Peter will rescue him, trash his old man, and they'll end up a threesome. Oh, wait a minute, I like that idea, might use it myself. Anyway, keep up the good work, can't wait to see what else you come up with, and if there is anything I can do to help just let me know. Cheers

I really love this story. It got incredibly hot in the second chapter--I mean easily one of the best slash fics I've ever read. It's a shame you aren't updating! Hurry it up!

Poor naughty. No reveiws so far huh? Well heres mine. I loved it. This story is so hot it knocked my panties off. Some days I just wander around the web looking for somthing just like this. Inspired smut like this is very rare you know. And another bit of praise is due for contributing to the starved spider-man fandom.

Now on to the good stuff. I love the idea of Spider-man's powers making him a sex object. Its tantilizing and it has a basis in both science and comic book cannon.
First the comic book link.In the regular marvel U the current Spider-woman has an ability the whenever she is frightend of nervous she releases a pheromone that makes men want her sexually. It would make sense if Peter had the same thing.

Now for the science. As you may no male spiders are in constant danger of being eaten by the females. They are after all much smaller than the girls. In response to this threat they release a signal that says as loud as possible"Don't eat me! Fuck me instead!" Which explains Peter's reaction to sexual stimualtion in the face of danger.

So instead of the standard fight/flight response to danger Peter has a fight/flight/fuck response.^-^

I would love to talk to you more about the ideas presented in your story so drop me an e-mail. Till then great fic. Can't wait for more.

Wow. This is off to an amazing start. I really love it so far. Great story, and very hot, too. I hope you'll update soon!