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It's about time you updated this! I had begun to think that you left us! PLEASE don't make us wait so long again! Great chapter ;)

Wow this is really cool! Please please please write some more. And if you could e-mail me when you have updated it :)

Very exciting story! What a cliffhanger! Please, please, please, update soon!

What an awesome story! Seriously wasn't that keen on the pairing when I saw it, but I decided to give your story a try, and I'm really glad I did. I wish you would work more Peter into the story though. He must have been going stir-crazy locked up like that. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story. Please keep updating!

OMG!

PLEASE update this-- NOW!

As hot as Otto and Norman are-- I can't help but be more interested in Peter and his interactions with them-- and that cliffhanger suggests some MAJOR interaction!

This is fantastic! Please don't keep us hanging long!

I really like the concept of this fic! Like you, I really was intrigued by Osborne's possessiveness of Peter in Ultimate Spider-Man. I really hope you continue this! And though I'd never really thought about Ock and Osborne together-- they are hot!

Err I never thought my criticism would have do anything, but give my opinion. Im honored, but please write the story as you want =] Ironically though I liked this chapter a bit more than the others. Though Peter had more of the role, it was actually Norman's interaction with him that was interesting. Alot of times when we think of villains we seem them solely in that role. Evil, inhuman, and even insane.
Thats what makes villains so interesting though. They 'are' human. Sometimes the only thing seperating the villains from heroes is that villains are willing to go that extra step for what they want or care for. Even if it does make them villains in the end.

Anyway, good chapter. I hope to read the next one soon (but no pressure).

Hey Kinky, nice to see you're still writing. As far as I'm concerned you are still the mistress that makes me cringe (probably a good thing). You still have your own style that I find attractive in the writing and repulsive in the subject. The only reason I'm reading is because you are such a good author.

Why do we keep putting Peter through hell?

*groan* I had a nice semi-long review and I accidentlyclicked a ling erasing it it. I don't remember all I said but wanted to tell you I hope you dont get discouraged by lack of reviews. Perhaps people just can't or don't want to view Otto and Norman outside their traditional roles, I don't know, but I hope you continue the story.
I do wish Peter played more of a role. Norman's attemtps and Peter's defense/reactions are my favorite parts.
I know I wrote alot more than this, but this is all I can really remember.
Thank you for sharing/continuingthe story.

WOW...I've never pictured this pairing before. Ithink that you are doing a good job. hope you continue. :)