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for Thus Spake: Oh, Superman!

by Tycho

person Jango_
schedule May 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Question is this an edited version? I only ask because I remember reading something very similar to this but the ending was very different ending in which supes dies via kryptonite.

person Anonymous
schedule July 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

where's all the content gone?

person pedro
schedule May 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
it is incomplete
person Rider09
schedule February 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Question, why is this short? I cant read the rest
person SpectralTime
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Got as far as the Wonder Woman chapter, and I'm glad I did.

Up til then things were kinda... bleak. Especially given Lois died with hardly a word off-page and little fanfare, though I suppose she'll reconstitute herself later as some kind of superhero or other.

But the Wonder Woman chapter was pretty good, and you did a pretty good job of writing her.
person Maddiline
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Best part was WW/SM, through and though for me. All of it was okay, but Starfire kinda came off as a unapologetic, cheating jerk compared to all the other girls just having fun and sexing it up with, so I didn't like seeing her get any. No sexy fun times with Superman, she isn't worthy! LOL. Otherwise, a fun romp.
person Chris
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I wish there was a gay version too.
person SuperD
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hope the story isn't over! Very funny story. The sex was crazy! LOL. Being a big SMWW fan I really enjoyed those scenes the best, but I enjoyed the others very much as well!

Anymore story or are you done?
person Deadsori
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All of this are good especially the power girl scene since she's my favorite.but i just had a mental vision on the supergirl scene where superman think her breast is as firm as gold then they dont jiggle? or if a normal person grab her breast it will feel like your touching a olympian guy's bicep,uggghhhhh! the horror!
person JDC
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That Power Girl chapter was brilliant in every way and proves you've still got it. Hope you continue to do more. Don't want to step on your toes, but what about something with Mary Marvel? Or Stargirl? Or the classic Supergirl/Power Girl threesome? I'll shut up now. Post again soon, please!