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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff!
I'd love to see more.
I'd love to see more.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love his Wonder Woman and Kara moments best, More please.
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sensational chapter
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing!!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Greatest. Superman. Story. Ever.
'This looks like its a job for Superman!'
HAHAHA.
'This looks like its a job for Superman!'
HAHAHA.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Review on chapter 7: bloody amazing. I liked the previous chapter as well, but this one was the best (I haven't yet read the last one). The sex between Supes and WW was incredibly well written, and when they landed in Metropolis, I was laughing aloud for MINUTES! Also, when Clark read Lois's letter, tears came to my eyes. You managed to make me aroused, giggly and tearful with this single chapter. Bravo!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, read the last chapter. I must admit that since I'm not for 'gruppensex', I didn't particularly enjoy reading about it. I would have been happier if the fic had ended after chapter 7, it would have been the perfect ending. Oh well. Overall, it was still a very enjoyable story and I'm sure I will be coming back to read and reread chapter 7 again and again :)
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this was a bit strange at first but I guess it's not a serious fic so okay.
The rest wasn't bad but that ending made no sense what's so ever. It was just really messed up, you got greedy and tried to put too many women in that one you should have just kept it with the ones you had. Make a sequel with more women or just expand it if you wanted more. Although a few of those women already had someone like Barda is married so that makes no sense at all.
Plus I was expecting Maxima to get nocked up too. Over all okay story but had a sucky ending.
The rest wasn't bad but that ending made no sense what's so ever. It was just really messed up, you got greedy and tried to put too many women in that one you should have just kept it with the ones you had. Make a sequel with more women or just expand it if you wanted more. Although a few of those women already had someone like Barda is married so that makes no sense at all.
Plus I was expecting Maxima to get nocked up too. Over all okay story but had a sucky ending.
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished your story, the first thing is that it's too bad that Lois is gone but you've more then made up for it by adding so many other hot characters for Superman. This is probably the best superman story I've read anywhere around. I do hope you add on another chapter or a new story. Great job and great story.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Having read the final chapter, I realy must applaud your orginality in the various sexual acts performed therein. Erotica far too often falls into a simple formula, which makes it all very much the same. Your decision to step outside of established norms is a nice change of pace. I very much look forward to any further offerings on this subject, particularly any 'alternative' uses you might find for the various character's powers. A sequel involving the entire league would be rather cool(though I do like the current one man against the horde vibe of your writing.)