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for Peace

by Swallow

schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah Momma!
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just WOW. You have a fantastic ability to create tension. Amazing! I think you could get any two enemies to go at it, you just have a knack for turning that anger into passion...I'm very impressed! Please continue this story, I really want to see "the morning after," lol! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kash
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok.So I am a big TMNT fan.My fave I Leonardo.And as for supporting cast and vilains go Karai is the on.

I have read some fics with these two getin'it on with eachother.

Some good...some not so good.

This was the best!:)You managed to write a fic with the right length and you really got the mood right!
Whats next?I'm a fan now lol.

Truly exelente'
person Jinn-Jinn
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow, that was the best Leo/Karai I've ever read. Beautifully well written too. I am definitely printing this and taking it with me to China! :-)
person midnightrose
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
swallow i loved reading this when green showed me were to find it and i'm glad you put it here so more people can read it. keep it up.wonderful fic.but i always loved a good leo/karai smut fic lol.

midnightrose
person FFdemon
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a really great Leo/Karai story. You discribe so perfecty the ambivalence of Karai feeling.
Wonderful work. ;)