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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful Leo perspective! This story has a powerful display of raw emotions and its beautifully written! I hope to read more soon.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really moving,especially as it happened to Raph who is seen has strong,love to read more,how they all get through it!!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is... an interesting concept. One I've toyed with, to be honest. Though I have to admit, I've never thought of the repercussions of a FORCEABLE rape on any of the guys. My thoughts have always run more along the lines of "Intimidation" (dunno if you ever read that one, but it's good if you can find it) or emotionally devastating forced sex.
The part about him reflecting that he probably could've run but he thought he could/wanted to stay and fight them... rings true with Raph. Probably with all of them, in that situation. I'd have to think about it more before I said that for sure, but I think it's possible that all of them would've reacted pretty much the same in the given circumstances.
Anyways... good job. Well written. Thanks for writing!
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The part about him reflecting that he probably could've run but he thought he could/wanted to stay and fight them... rings true with Raph. Probably with all of them, in that situation. I'd have to think about it more before I said that for sure, but I think it's possible that all of them would've reacted pretty much the same in the given circumstances.
Anyways... good job. Well written. Thanks for writing!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really know how to set a scene. I like how you went into some details but were careful not to go to far. I would love to read the reactions of his brothers. I hope you continue this.