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Hello there!. I've been reading this wonderful story thanks a friend's recommendation. I'ts a great piece and I'm looking forward to read more. I also want to report that recently most of the text in most of the chapters seems to be lost for some unknown reason, this has happened with other stories in this place, I hope this doesn't discourage you from writing more and perhaps reposting the previous chapters, since it would be superawesome keep reading this great fic.

I truly enjoyed reading this!!! Please do more!!!

I am not usually a fan of Leo-centric fics, but I am IN LOVE with this story! I would love to see more Leo/Karai fics that take place before they decide to adopt :)

Here I am again! I could have sworn that I left a review about the drabble this story inspired ( http://community.livejournal.com/tmnt_tuesdays/85003.html sorry, it's f-locked for content. ). I am rewriting some of the flawed writing in my extended story so it hasn't been posted yet... but I was thrilled to see this continued! Summary{Leonardo is considering the Utrom Shredder's revelation of alternate universes containing them (Turtles Forever) and he got a glimpse of Karai looking grumpy at the wedding ceremony. Understandably, it gives him some pause. (But, Raph is able to distract him by playing a bit with imitating her voice -- then it gets smutty cause Raph figured out Leo's mating season has come a bit early and intends to enjoy it.)} Then the damn thing spawned 2 years of backstory cause the guys seemed to be talkative that day. Come see the dA account where this smut will be posted:: http://prophetella.deviantart.com/ contact me via Oraclesparkle(at)yahoo.com (cause your email is hidden) if you have any objections or one of the IM programs mentioned on the profile there. I'M THRILLED with chapter 15 and that Leo got a clue from the cutest OC I have evar seen! He'll make a great papa but I fully expect him to have trouble-- if he can see the conditions of a crowded orphanage first hand-- with sticking to just one kiddo.

amazing just absolutely amazing and i mean truly i am in love with this fic and as i read i didnt want it to end. the story is sooo sexy yet soo sweet. i love that leo requested a girl PLease UPDATE SOON Recey2010 out

A child into the mix eh? I hope that doesn't stop the crazy smut! ;o)

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Oi oi! I'll be happy to read the mating season scene! I'm so friggin' happy you updated this, by the way!

ch 18

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I give this fic 100/10. The characters stay in character. Plenty of drama. And it was so realistic I could actually see it happening. Please don't let this be the end, the fic must go on!

So amazing! She finally said those 3 words! I hope this isn't the end of the story! I love this fic so much! You captured Leo and Karai so beautifully!

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Ahh! Chapter 15 was great! More please!