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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice ^.^ I always liked this couple.
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...so very hot. Leo certainly does not get enough attention in the bedroom. Or kitchen. ^_~
It just seems to fit him, having such a fantasy. I'm glad they were both so thouroughly pleasured. I can't wait until they get to Japan! You'd better be using these next couple of months in motion, brainstorming. Hehehe. Please?
It just seems to fit him, having such a fantasy. I'm glad they were both so thouroughly pleasured. I can't wait until they get to Japan! You'd better be using these next couple of months in motion, brainstorming. Hehehe. Please?
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I love this story. I check every other day for updates. Every since it was published here. Please continue this story. And if you can, please update more often.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. I dared not hope to hear more from this wonderful tale. Now you've got it all set up for the next chapter...I hope it's soon!
I'm certainly glad that Karai got the heebie-jeebies from his touch. I can't wait to see how things work out..and if they kiss and make up. Or at least kiss. ^^
I'm certainly glad that Karai got the heebie-jeebies from his touch. I can't wait to see how things work out..and if they kiss and make up. Or at least kiss. ^^
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great, when ch 5 come?
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Jinn, you better not take too long with chapter 5. I'm squirming in anticipation over here!
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely lovely job on all the chapters so far. What a beautiful take on the frustratingly complex Leo/Karai relationship. Fantas.
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww. So very sweet. I love this story, and was so looking foward to more character develoment. Great writing!
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January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great story! I've never liked a Karai fic before. :) You did a great job with Leo's character.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
G'day Jinn-Jinn,
I have some good news for you! This story has been nominated in the 2006 Adult Fan Fiction Awards! I am one of the organizers of this competition this year and it's my job to contact all the authors nominated to ask their permission prior to officially entering their works into the event. I normally do this via email or PM, but haven't had any luck uncovering an alternate way to contact you. If you would like to participate I need to be able to send you a 'nomination authorization' message, so please contact me via the email address given above (shinkiro57 at hotmail dot com), or via PM or email on the Stealthy Stories Forums which is co-hosting this event with Mikey's Forums (in the 'Adults Only' section of each). I need to have received permission from you on or before the 16th of January 2007 for you works to be entered in the competition. CONGRATULATIONS on being nominated, I do hope very much to hear from you soon!
And I should really review while I'm here, huh?
I really enjoyed this story, I am a BIG sucker for Leo/Karai and I liked the way she took so long to admit her acceptance of him. The problems and pitfalls of their relationship are what make it so interesting to me.
The only thing I could pick with it is the tense of the words you were using often 'skipped' to present tense, despite the majority of the text being in past tense. I noticed this more in the second chapter, and while it doesn't really detract from the meaning I derived from the story it did make me have to re-read a couple of sentences here and there. Not that I minded too much! Think I'll be re-reading this fic a few times for myself anyway! Thank you for a great read!
Cheers!
Reijiro.
I have some good news for you! This story has been nominated in the 2006 Adult Fan Fiction Awards! I am one of the organizers of this competition this year and it's my job to contact all the authors nominated to ask their permission prior to officially entering their works into the event. I normally do this via email or PM, but haven't had any luck uncovering an alternate way to contact you. If you would like to participate I need to be able to send you a 'nomination authorization' message, so please contact me via the email address given above (shinkiro57 at hotmail dot com), or via PM or email on the Stealthy Stories Forums which is co-hosting this event with Mikey's Forums (in the 'Adults Only' section of each). I need to have received permission from you on or before the 16th of January 2007 for you works to be entered in the competition. CONGRATULATIONS on being nominated, I do hope very much to hear from you soon!
And I should really review while I'm here, huh?
I really enjoyed this story, I am a BIG sucker for Leo/Karai and I liked the way she took so long to admit her acceptance of him. The problems and pitfalls of their relationship are what make it so interesting to me.
The only thing I could pick with it is the tense of the words you were using often 'skipped' to present tense, despite the majority of the text being in past tense. I noticed this more in the second chapter, and while it doesn't really detract from the meaning I derived from the story it did make me have to re-read a couple of sentences here and there. Not that I minded too much! Think I'll be re-reading this fic a few times for myself anyway! Thank you for a great read!
Cheers!
Reijiro.