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Thanks for the review Mel... :) I'm still working on ideas for chapter two. But lately my time has spent updating Wasted... But I will be adding more.. :)

wow, that was really good. i hope you continue this and develope the plot more. THis is one of those stories that even if you were to never include sex (Seeing as how this is posted on Adult Fanfiction i'm assuming ;) ) this would be a brilliant story just in itself. Betrayal, angst, fighting, intensity, and brotherly ties being made stronger as well as being severed. It really is an awesome idea and i hope you continue it. :) i'm definately going to be watching this one!

~Mel