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for Girls' Night Out --(Part 2)

by Riot Storm

person mindy
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant absolutely brilliant. Been on this site for just a few months and have to say this is one of the best adult fanfics Ive read. DO please carry on with this riot-storm. cant wait to see what you do about corrupting dear Lois lane. and the other heroes. Thanks again
person Angelalex242
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
They really don't learn, do they? If they had any sense at all, they would've brought Wonder Woman and Power Girl with them. All the power, none of the male weaknesses. But, that's just my logical train of thought.
person Anon
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story, both actually - had been hoping for a full on Supergirl/Superman scene with all the teasing though.
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am not typically into the kind of hard 'man-breaking' femdom Riotstorm writes, but he does such a damn good job with it, and with keeping the characters personalities intact rather than parodying them - just great.
person Riot Storm Admirer
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just amazing...each chapter provides better and even more creative writing. It leaves one with only one possible reaction: to crave more, more more. Don't stop. Stay inspired. Your gift in creative writing truly overwhelms.
person Riot Storm Admirer
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok... you've got me sitting on the edge of my seat. Can't wait to see these goddesses triumph. More, more more. Looking forward to reading more of your talented writing.
person Riot Storm Admirer
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah...in case you needed to hear this again...more...More...MORE!!!!!!!
person Riot Storm Admirer
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now were cookin! How about some more dark Supergirl images for inspiration:

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/8118/josephmackiedarksupergirlcolorra2.jpg

http://www.enchantedelysia.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/12/es2.jpg

http://media.comicvine.com/uploads/0/1494/86396-767-supergirl_super.jpg

http://www.phonethemepark.com/wp-content/uploads/image/evil_Supergirl_iphone_wallpaper.jpg

Stay inspired!!!!!

person anonymous
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter really. Now I really want to see what happens in the next one with Tangle as she's my favorite of the female villains. Here's to hoping that she'll get to ride Kal hard until he screams her name.

A little from Lois' point of view would be appreciated as well.

Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a copout!....listen to the violins cause you're burnt out. You ignore your gift. You are an entertainer and your stories are better than anyone's published here. Quit the whining and get busy! The economy sucks, life sucks and we're all holding on to bits of hope and glimmer to keep us going. If you're burnt, ask for input but don't quit. There's enough crap in 2009 for all of us, we need bright lights like your writing.