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for Girls' Night Out --(Part 2)

by Riot Storm

person Anon
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
let your most creative juices flow for the last chapters... the humiliation is the easy part, it's already happening. But it's time for a new order of power goddesses especially ones that can rule the world...alex, kara, lasso girl in her new costume, celeste...let the powers come together and truly rule and take everything that they desire.
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
where is the update...it's time for alexandra unbridled ..draining ..absorbing ...growing muscle....and taking the very life essence from these helpless men...
person Anon
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh great...just great....no updates for almost 2 months. do you do this deliberately? make us hunger for more and then leave us hanging. c'mon give us more. you are a talent in writing. share it!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i feel myself succumbing to alexandra's power...willingly...hoping for her to keep the powers she's draining...alex & kara...the true superior team for the new millenium...more more more
person Anon
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm begging...my blood pressure elevated...cold sweats...other things I just can't mention. More more more, soon soon soon. Please!!!
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is better? Now I've gone from drooling to double drooling waiting for even more more more. Please, if I have to wait another 3 months I may have to go into cardiac care.
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How long do we have to wait, drool and go crazy until new chapters are up???? C'mon...show some mercy on your fans.
person adjourny
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, that was hot.

How about the villains kidnapp Lois and then have sex with Clark in front of her, or the other way around, or both.
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
every chapter is making theses goddesses sexier and more powerful..I'm having trouble resisting just as a reader. Where I always want more more more...it's getting to the point where I CRAVE more more more...keep it going!
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now it's heating up...the goddesses seem unstoppable and soooo hot....more more more please don't keep us hanging too long