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for Invisible Collar

by liliaeth

person Carissa
schedule January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Why? Why would you do this to him? I cried after every chapter because it was so saddening!!!WHAT DID YOU DO TO PETER?????WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?????
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The truly sad part about this fic

is that it would be true

the Gov would enslave superheros for weapons

I shudder to think when the Government oversteps its bounds for innovative weapons

... like they will in time
person abakus
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've followed it up till chapter 10 which is not posted yet. So far I find it very disturbing and I got late for work today because I needed to read on. I'm drawn to broken character fics, don't know why, probably b/c they're much more interesting than the pure fluff (which I don't believe in anyway), but then there's my damn inner romantic that yearns for a happy end. True h/c addict.
So far there's only hurt, which is fine, but here comes the begging. a) Please continue writing the fic!! b) Please at some point find a way for Peter to trust again, though I can't see a way out right now c) Have your warnings been a precaution? So far all I've seen is torture.
Once again, please don't abandon the fic!
Why aren't there 20 reviews by now?
person karaQ
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Read this at F.F, but decided to review here. I like it. Wonder what Norman did to Peter, though... ^_^
More please!

~karaQ