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by rainbowsindecember

person pst
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad Betty got someone better than Archie. I always wondered how she could take so much shit...
person Tira
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really sweet! Your story works beautifully, and I love the slow downward spiral that we follow Betty on, how it changes once she breaks out of the love triangle she was in. The love scenes were perfect. Excellent work.
person CeeCee
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how poetic this story is, and Betty's internal narrative throughout. You've made her real and very believable as someone who's smile hides sadness at not being good enough, or so she perceives. Definitely the mark of a people-pleasing overachiever. I hope you'll write another story with these characters, since I also LOVE Reggie. Especially how you wrote him.
person Hajime
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sniff! me likie this fic. betty so deserves happiness and i like reggie more than archie even if he is a bit conceited. good job on this fic. i hope you'll write more betty/reggie stories ^_^