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by Berkid42

schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know what, I can't believe nobody - not ONE - has reviewed this little gem right under our noses. I thought it had a great beginning, and is just developing into a wonderful piece on JugheadxBetty. It was coherent, had a good flow, and it was much better than many fictions I've read with atrocious grammatical mistakes. I can't wait to read more on what happens. Good job on this story!