This was a BRILLIANT retelling of that tract! So chilling! Minerva is so TWISTED! I get the sense that she has a humiliation kink and I don't know if Mike shares it so I pity him if he feels trapped in that 'relationship'. I like how you re-did this tract from Minerva's perspective, and how you resolved the issue you opened with Mike wanting to get away from Minerva to in the end he did. (I don't know, maybe something resonated with me there.)
I found this story because I was curious if anyone had the same idea I had to review and redo these tracts. This was better than I imagined since I couldn't see anyway to redeem the tracts once they started getting too preachy despite having an interesting opening set up. Thank you for demonstrating this much creativity! It's why I got addicted to fanfiction in the first place. I just had to create an account here to let you know that.
Did you know Jack chick passes away a while back. Such a shame he can't make more of his tracts so we can make fun of him
I love the characterisation of Ms Frost, too.