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by Kismet

person sheraven
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that this is set from April's prospective...and the little misunderstanding at the end. Your writing was free of spelling and grammer errors, leaving me free to enjoy the content fully. What a lot of writers forget is that the turtles are master ninja, and your comments about Don's sudden appearance, sure footing, and ease of carrying April were great. Excellent story, please write again.
person sss979
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Ambiguous and interesting. I like it. :) I got a little wary at the prospect of Donatello initiating sex with a drugged April, but the ambiguous-ness that followed made the story definitely worth reading. Good work. ;)
-fig