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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool not bad for an PWP especialy like how felicia and Mary Jane "Double Team" Peter Parker in your Sex Scene That Was Classic!
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Short, sexy, and sweet. But it felt a little too short. I wish there were more descriptions too. But it was still an enjoyable read. I encourage you to write another one. I would definitely read that one as well. Overall, a nice fic. Keep up the good work! Slickboy out.
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job D!
I like it. Quick pace, gets to the point wiht a good eye for action. Not bad. I would like to see more of a style develop though...
Basically I want to see more.
I like it. Quick pace, gets to the point wiht a good eye for action. Not bad. I would like to see more of a style develop though...
Basically I want to see more.