rate_review Reviews

I was just wondering how I could read the full story of this because it gets cut off near the beginning??? 

Seriously, this is amazing. You need to keep righting about this two. You really captured the essence of both of them, at least for a first time together. Amazing, really.

Enchantingly well written. I love how you intertwine moments of true tenderness with comedic relief, all the while remaining true to the characters' motivations by honestly noting various dark, highly unhealthy aspects of the relationship. I am particularly infatuated with the ambiguous nature of the narrative voice when events are told from his perspective. Is he a manipulative sadistic bastard experiencing a semblance of affection and desire for the first time, leading him to spiral even further into his murderous mood swings as he is faced with something he does not recognise, or is he just rationalising his behaviour to himself when he thinks up how manipulative he is being and how powerless she is, subconsciously knowing all the while that he isn't being nearly as clever as he thinks he is, and that she is slowly gaining power over him? In short, it made me giggle, tear up, and think all at the same time, and if that's not deserving of a full rating, I don't know what is.

Have I said yet how awesome this is?

I really hope you're going to do more for this =) and I laugh very hard at the

"Their courtship had been wonderfully old-fashioned thus far - enjoying simple pleasures such as walks by the harbour, dancing the night away and crafting homemade bombs - but girls these days were decidedly more - modern. And apparently, they had “needs”."

that was classic, truly hope to see more from you