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March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, what the fuck is wrong with you? Do you people seriously get off on this? WTF???
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March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is fucking disturbing and I never want to read it again
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February 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
JayDee
I've owed you this review for a week or so, since I saw your reply review thread, and my brain immediately said: Wow, if someone has reacted like this, I have to read!
I was not disappointed. The details... oh, wow! This reads like a cross between an horrific cartoon and a Hostel movie. The rape. Okay. I've seen authors write about bashing cervixes no end of times. So much so blah usually. But this here, this is just amazing writing! You gave me enough description to suspend my disbelief and see it happening.
And then the eating, written as a natural progression from the rape/disembowelling rather than separate scenes. I don't know this fandom, so I don't know this character, but I hardly need to. You gave me all the information I needed. Stuff like this shouldn't flow, but it does here. In full colour.
And then that final bit of the scene. I am so completely in awe of you. To me you are a legend. Bravo!
I've owed you this review for a week or so, since I saw your reply review thread, and my brain immediately said: Wow, if someone has reacted like this, I have to read!
I was not disappointed. The details... oh, wow! This reads like a cross between an horrific cartoon and a Hostel movie. The rape. Okay. I've seen authors write about bashing cervixes no end of times. So much so blah usually. But this here, this is just amazing writing! You gave me enough description to suspend my disbelief and see it happening.
And then the eating, written as a natural progression from the rape/disembowelling rather than separate scenes. I don't know this fandom, so I don't know this character, but I hardly need to. You gave me all the information I needed. Stuff like this shouldn't flow, but it does here. In full colour.
And then that final bit of the scene. I am so completely in awe of you. To me you are a legend. Bravo!
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January 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God this made Cupcakes and Sweet Apple Massacre look like children's nursery rhymes in comparison! Why, why, WHY do you people write stuff like this?!?!?!
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January 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is probably one of the sickest, most vile and disturbing pieces of work I have read on here so far. Oh my God. I feel like pouring bleach into my eyeballs, tearing them out, eating them, regurgitating them, and then eating what I just regurgitated. Then repeating the cycle until I mercifully pass out/die from blood loss. Nothing (not even Fifty Shades of Gray) can compare to this, Nothing, I repeat. Nothing. NOTHING. I am this close to putting a gun to my head and permanently erasing any memory of what I just read (LOL, not really). As well-written (maybe a little too so) as this story was, and no matter how many warnings or disclaimers you put at the top, nothing could have prepared me for what I was about to witness. Now if you'll excuse me, I must go off to the bathroom to indulge in a night-long session of projectile vomiting. Wish me luck, cause I sure as hell think I'm gonna need it, especially tonight. :)
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn O_O that was cool