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for Not the Sun

by CeeCee

person maxiefae
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what are you doing to me! do you hate me or something? please update i need some big m and big e love here
person EvaBrick
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read some more of this story. I'd never thought of Ethel and Moose hooking up, but they're actually pretty perfect for each other when you think about it.
It's too bad that Midge isn't a dude so someone could punch her. I've always thought she was such a bitch, even when I was a kid.
I'm a little disapointed in Moose, though. He's so immature; Ethel's too good for him and he needs to realise that and get his act together before she realises it herself.
I really hope that you update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
AWESOME STORY!
person maxiefae
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I.LOVE.THIS.STORY PLEASE PLEASE UPDATED
person Boazig
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Ive been checking to see if it was updated like every other day. It made my WEEK to get another chapter! I love it :D
person maxiefae
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that rocks i hope bee and big will have a happy ending
person maxiefae
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please PLEASE update
person maxiefae
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE GO ON
person Boazig
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is probably my favourite Archie fanfiction EVER.

I absolutely adore it. You've made me a hardcore Moose/Ethel fan!!
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ye Gawds, this guy runs hot and cold at the same time!
I'm loving this story, I wonder what made Juggie put the moves on her?
Last minute thing? Grr! I could kick him! lol
Great update! I get tired of Moose being used by midge, she annoys me sometimes.
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story.
It's so new and so fresh! You have to keep going!
I never thought of Moose + Ethel before, you've
opened up alot of possibilities! lol I think she's the only girl
that can put the big ol' lug in a headlock! lol
Keep up the good work!!!

SP~