rate_review Reviews

Interesting fic. I'm suprised with the update! Lots of good stuff usually gets dumped around here. Great drama going on. Hah. Peter took MJ's black cherry.

Yeah, "nearly" a year. It's almost nine months since that moment. I figured it was close enough to a year to say that.

Not a bad update. My only probably is that you said it was nearly a year, implying longer than the 9 months it takes for a baby to be born. You might want to reword that part.

Okay for some reason the review screwed up. Anyways, no real sex in this chapter but from what I saw I'm hoping for an MJ/She-Hulk in the next. Something I've been wondering, did MJ have her baby in this? She lost it in the comics so I have to wonder if she would feel any kind of resentment or envy of She-Hulk. Or if she hasn't had one, I have to wonder if this will make her want one. Given how much she and Peter are going at it, she just might get pregnant pretty soon.

Although I'm surprised by the b-list villain but then again, Spider-Man doesn't really have many female villains. I have to wonder if when he wakes up, he'll bang her or defeat her leave very frustrated to see his wife in bed with She-Hulk and this leads into a threeway.

Also I had to change my penname as my account got deleted for no apparent reason so I'll repost Dark Urges and everything else soon.

I know its not listed as such but im realy hopeing that Peater MJ and She-Hulk can work out a threesome ^_^

Another great chapter, man! This fic is great and getting better all the time!

This has got to be the best Marvel Hero story every! I love that you've continued it! I think your doing a great job. Please write more soon.

Great new chapter. Loving the drama mixed with the sex and tension, a rarity and I must say you do it well. As for future plots.... ends in threesome? Half kidding... but still... now I'm distracted... in any case, maybe Peter ends up with Jennifer again and Mary Jane begins to suspect? Either that or She Hulk and Spidey end up running into each other and give into the passion? Just throwing that out there. Also, a baby with both gamma powers and spider powers? That should prove interesting. Especially if it has both its parents sense of humor.

Once again, very well done! I'm looking forward to seeing how you mix things up.

Great story!
Glad to see you continuing, there is alot of potential in the story/pairing. Will Peter go back to She Hulk or vice versa? Or will he stay true to his marriage? Maybe more She Hulk/Spidey sex? Not to mention the plotline with Jennifer deciding to keep their child. Hope to see the next chapter soon, keep up the kick ass work!